Malo soifua, my name is Vaa I like how you do your writing correctely also I like how you put the full stop wher it is ment to be and the capital letter.
Talofa Lava this is Viena and Ruqayat, from Edmund Hillary School. I love how you found so many different sock, and how you told us how you feel. We have no questions but keep up the good work.
Hi this is Soloia, Aysha and Victoria from Edmund Hillary School. we like how you looked and found so many socks in the juniors playground that was kind of funny but lucky there is some spare socks for use.
Hello Belfast School this is Ema, Victoria and Nese from Edmund Hillary School. Your colour choice for your background is an amazing combination and your composting situation story was really interesting to read. We have no questions and heads up for you.
Hi there, my name is Tulson and I am a student in Room 14 at mangapapa School. I really like that you are trying to stop all the socks on the playground and the junk everywhere. It made me think of our big side sometimes all it takes is to pike up one bit of rubbish when your out it's simple really. Have you thought about having a bin where every time you go on you have to put it into a bucket. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://Tulson,s learning. blogspot.co.nz
Hi there, my name is Mikayla and I am a student in Room 14 at Mangapapa School. I really like the way you added lots detail about the chair and the socks. It made me think of when I was a Year One I was firing my socks at my friend, Have you thought about rereading your post before you post? it I just saw some spelling mistakes that's all. If you would like to see my learning my blog is https://mikaylaslearning.blogspot.com/.
Talofa lava Paroa School room 14 this is Nese, Victoria and Emora. We really find your poster informative and fascinating! Maybe next time you could use past tense just a little bit more. P.S Great work!
Hi my name is Karson and I am from Edmund Hillary School and I found that finding a lot of socks around in the juniors playground and that was kinda mysterious and was the socks dirty around in the juniors playground and finding a strange chair in the composting area?🤔
Hi my name is Tylah and u already know that cause Ur in my class anyway I like how its coulorful and good information to make a point maybe next time u could use Punctuation to make it clear
Malo soifua, my name is Vaa I like how you do your writing correctely also I like how you put the full stop wher it is ment to be and the capital letter.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Curtis and I go to paroa school I like how you said how you feel and that you said what you found.
ReplyDeleteTalofa Lava this is Viena and Ruqayat, from Edmund Hillary School.
ReplyDeleteI love how you found so many different sock, and how you told us how you feel. We have no questions but keep up the good work.
Hi this is Soloia, Aysha and Victoria from Edmund Hillary School.
ReplyDeletewe like how you looked and found so many socks in the juniors playground that was kind of funny but lucky there is some spare socks for use.
Hello Belfast School this is Ema, Victoria and Nese from Edmund Hillary School. Your colour choice for your background is an amazing combination and your composting situation story was really interesting to read. We have no questions and heads up for you.
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Tulson and I am a student in Room 14 at mangapapa School. I really like that you are trying to stop all the socks on the playground and the junk everywhere. It made me think of our big side sometimes all it takes is to pike up one bit of rubbish when your out it's simple really. Have you thought about having a bin where every time you go on you have to put it into a bucket. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://Tulson,s learning. blogspot.co.nz
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Mikayla and I am a student in Room 14 at Mangapapa School. I really like the way you added lots detail about the chair and the socks. It made me think of when I was a Year One I was firing my socks at my friend, Have you thought about rereading your post before you post? it I just saw some spelling mistakes that's all. If you would like to see my learning my blog is https://mikaylaslearning.blogspot.com/.
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Talofa lava Paroa School room 14 this is Nese, Victoria and Emora. We really find your poster informative and fascinating! Maybe next time you could use past tense just a little bit more.
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Great work!
Hi room 14 this is Elena from Edmund Hillary School. I like how you wrote about how you feel and what you have found around the playground area.
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ReplyDeleteHi my name is Karson and I am from Edmund Hillary School and I found that finding a lot of socks around in the juniors playground and that was kinda mysterious and was the socks dirty around in the juniors playground and finding a strange chair in the composting area?🤔
Hi my name is Tylah and u already know that cause Ur in my class anyway I like how its coulorful and good information to make a point maybe next time u could use Punctuation to make it clear
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