I felt unbalanced as l skated down towards a big tree. I felt like my harness was going to snap. I got to the other side and I thought thank goodness for that. The employees said it was something like 35 feet up in the trees. The next stage was 8 wooden pallets lined up haning with 2 pegs nailed itto it. To stand on you had to use all of your upper body and i am teling you now it was hard. I got across and my friend was yelling out
“Help help” it is to hard my arms are sore i saw he was not yousing the pegs so i said to him yous the pegs he yous the pegs like this is easy how needs help on that i said to him here is the easy part the zipline yes i got on the zipline it was so hard but the view was 1$ million dollars i was loven it until that dang fly went stright up my nose we finshed the zipline we were at the bottom time for lunch my friend said i wounder what is for lunch. i said you had to pack your lunch YOU ARE KIding RIGHT
You wish.
by Cooper
kia ora
ReplyDeleteHi, this is Neha from Edmund Hillary School.I liked reading your camp reflection.it was really interesting how you skated towards a big tree.
Kia ora Cooper this is Ellakaye from Edmund Hillary School. I loved how interesting your story was about a camp reflection. Just a little tip you should check your spelling.
ReplyDeleteTena Koe Cooper, This is Ruqayat from Edmund Hillary School . I really loved reading it, It was very interesting reading your camp reflection ,I have no question but good work.
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ReplyDeleteThis is Aysha from Edmund Hillary school.I really loved your camp reflection it was great I have no questions today but I really enjoyed reading ok bye.
Kia Ora this is Ema and Victoria from Edmund Hillary School. We love how you added creative words in your camp story. We enjoyed reading and it was so interesting too. I have no questions and heads up for you.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is karson and I am from Edmund Hillary School and I was So amazed to see what happened to you when you went to camp and when you went on the zipline was it a bit weird when a fly went up into your nose and it distracted you from the view and what did it feel like adn did you see a lot of trees and birds and grass and the nice view of the sun and I hope you enjoyed going to camp.
ReplyDeleteHi it's Millie here, I really like your describing words you used I could picture it in my mind. It reminded me of when I did something like this. Next time read your spelling and make sure you have capatial I's otherwise I really liked it.
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora this is Soloia,Victoria and Ilaisaane from Edmund Hillary School. We like how you use describing words.We found it really interesting to read.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Cooer Mack here from paroa school i really like your camp reflection it makes me feel like i'm in the forest Great job
ReplyDeleteGreat job cooper but you could of added more detail but other than that you did a good job!
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